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Liliane Briarwyn's avatar

Oh, I love this equal parts lyrical and wry, like a glass raised to time itself.

“Thirties come and shake hands” What a line. That gentle image, halfway between surrender and a truce with time, feels so right. There’s a quiet power in how you balance irony with tenderness here… the kind of poem one returns to with a nod and a half-smile.

Wishing you a beautiful year ahead, Sofie, full of peaceful amends and unapologetic poetry.

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Markéta N. | Poetry's avatar

Hi Liliane, thank you so much for taking the time to comment, I changed the feel of the two paragraphs on purpose. So this comment is greatly validating. Happy writing to you!

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Liliane Briarwyn's avatar

You're most welcome, Sofie. It takes courage to trust your creative instinct like that, and I’m so glad you followed it. Wishing you a gentle and inspired writing season ahead. I look forward to reading more from your poetic world. 🌿📖✨

Warmly,

Liliane

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The Unusual Woman's avatar

Oh I really hope so!!

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